Feedback

Here is the feedback we got from our peers:

Positive Points:

• Nice variety of shots.

• Lighting well presented.

• The dance routine is very good.

• Good ending.

• Cinematography is very good.

• good lip-synching.

• nice locations.

• good choreography

• good use of cut aways.

• nice costumes.

• Performances is convincing.

Constructive Criticism:

• Lip-synching is slightly off.

• More footage of boys

• the card game doesn't fit.

Here is the feedback we got from Steve:

• Need to have one shot to keep coming back to (midshot of Hannah)

From Pete:

• The tracking shot that goes up Hannah should not be there/ show her face/ cut away to something else during it.
• More of the dancers

He liked this (below) effect on Hannah, and the close up is the best shot so use more of that

• The fade at one point nearly works, needs tweaking
• Some shots are too dark, find a way to make them lighter

From Nick:

• Too much Hannah not enough dancing
• Use more effects
• Use sequences
• Some shots go on for too long/ cut more
• Lip sync is off on some shots now